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Nostalgia + SpeedPaint

Published: Apr 26, 2015

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SpeedPaint: youtu.be/QNLXAJNXsSs
Here's meme: fav.me/d8r3g12

Heya. These are my very old OCs Hikari and Momoka (I'm really gonna re-name them :/ ) from my old old comic StarFall. I dropped it 2 years ago after 36 pages due to few reasons.
One was because I improved a lot during that one year of making it, so old pages were really painful to even look at, second reason was my taste changing. Basically I started to like less the idea of sugar moe moe comic and wanted to do something with a bit more sense. Third reason was probably just badly developed story and characters.In way I kinda feel like wanting to draw it again but then I'd have to do a lot of changes to the story + draw all the pages again.

Also thank for Miosha for points and early birthday wishes (gosh I forgot that my bithday is day after tomorrow O_o). You're super sweet person ♥

But because I so love embarrassing myself I decided to present this old comic of mine to you. I submitted the pages to my old DA so I have then translated to english. And I just realized that the translation probably sucks to ass =_= But at least I dropped off all the japanese word from original text so I bare you with that.
Here's link:
sta.sh/21tbyb2n66vg?edit=1

Ps. Sorry for my page being still empty. I hope no one thinks I've left from the site. I just can't buy a premium to myself even if I wanted (why can't I use my back account to do that :/) and I don't wanna mess with my page till I get some points to buy a new one.

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hatsuu-aki

Edited May 24, 2015

^{I really like all these details you put into this piece and the poses are also really nice!
But I feel like the colours are a bit too saturated and it makes it hard on the eyes. The bust of the girl on the left
is also a bit too high and... too short? What you also need look up are the clothes/folds
since they look too straight and too 'clean'/not textured enough to be clothes/folds and resemble more body paint or paper.
Anyway, you must have put a lot of effort into this :')
Hope you're not offended, tho. You improved a lot <3}